Dentists Help Underprivileged Children
SANTA CLARA, CA- Dentists will be providing free dental exams and treatments for underprivileged children during "Dentists with a Heart Day" next Friday, March 12 in dental offices throughout Santa Clara County.
About 70 dentists offices will be participating in this one day event sponsored by the Health Trust and the Santa Clara Dental Association. Their goal is to help up to 500 underprivileged children who would not otherwise have access to dental care
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Your lead is good, but qualify it with "Many local dentists" (or something to that effect) because not all dentists are participating in this program.
ReplyDelete* Calif., not CA (see states and datelines in the AP Stylebook)
* put a comma after March 12
* one-day event (hyphenate a compound adjective)
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